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Welcome to my 8th grade exit project
TOBACCO SMOKE
The articles and other informational texts that I have give a good sense of knowledge about tobacco smoke and the dangers they cause to Earth.

Trevor WatkinsMLATrevorMLA Citation of
Website Extension:My internet source ends with .com . This helps me determine that it is not a reliable source because it is a commercial source. But the information is from www.groiler.com so it is reliable because all of the information was cross referenced. And they are all informative entries.
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Trevor WatkinsMLATrevorMLA Citation of
Website Extension:My internet source ends with .com . This helps me determine that it is not a reliable source because it is a commercial source. But the information is from www.groiler.com so it is reliable because all of the information was cross referenced. And they are all informative entries.
Date:

Trevor WatkinsMLATrevorMLA Citation of
Website Extension:My internet source ends with .com . This helps me determine that it is not a reliable source because it is a commercial source. But the information is from www.groiler.com so it is reliable because all of the information was cross referenced. And they are all informative entries.
Date:

Pete Bonacci B.
5/18/12
11:01
Response
I thank Pete for reviewing my article and all of the gramatical errors were corrected
Kyle HowardH.
5/18/12
11:07

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TOBACCO SMOKE
The articles and other informational texts that I have give a good sense of knowledge about tobacco smoke and the dangers they cause to Earth.
Tobacco is bad for the health of the human and the health of the environment.
There are many chemicals found in many tobacco products.
LOOK AT ALL OF THE POISONOUS CHEMICALS FOUND IN JUST ONE CIGARETTE.
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Pete Bonacci
5/18/12
11:01
Positive Feedback
I think that Trevor's paper was very well organized. Also i loved how he used pictures in the article to give it a sense of understanding.
Negative Feedback
The only thing that I found that was wrong with Trevor's paper was that there was a few gramatical errors.
Response
I thank Pete for reviewing my article and all of the gramatical errors were corrected
Kyle Howard
5/18/12
11:07
Positive Feedback
I liked how his article gave all of the info it needed and was straight to the point.
Negative Feedback
The one thing i found was not in place in his paper was that it had no order.
Resonse
I thank Kyle also for the positive feedback and i ordered my papers so that it had a sense of structure.