8.RP.1.1

Pete B.
5/18/12
11:01

Positive Feedback

I think that Trevor's paper was very well organized. Also i loved how he used pictures in the article to give it a sense of understanding.

Negative Feedback

The only thing that I found that was wrong with Trevor's paper was that there was a few gramatical errors.

Response

I thank Pete for reviewing my article and all of the gramatical errors were corrected



Kyle H.
5/18/12
11:07

Positive Feedback

I liked how his article gave all of the info it needed and was straight to the point.

Negative Feedback

The one thing i found was not in place in his paper was that it had no order.

Resonse

I thank Kyle also for the positive feedback and i ordered my papers so that it had a sense of structure.