8.RP.1.1

//**Pete B.**// //**5/18/12**// //**11:01**//

__Positive Feedback__

I think that Trevor's paper was very well organized. Also i loved how he used pictures in the article to give it a sense of understanding.

__Negative Feedback__

The only thing that I found that was wrong with Trevor's paper was that there was a few gramatical errors.

__Response__

I thank Pete for reviewing my article and all of the gramatical errors were corrected

//**Kyle H.**// //**5/18/12**// //**11:07**//

__Positive Feedback__

I liked how his article gave all of the info it needed and was straight to the point.

__Negative Feedback__

The one thing i found was not in place in his paper was that it had no order.

__Resonse__

I thank Kyle also for the positive feedback and i ordered my papers so that it had a sense of structure.